学生英文组题目回顾
a.如果你需要向你的外国朋友介绍“高中双师课堂”，围绕“你和高中双师课堂”，写一封书信，字数在150字左右。
b.互联网技术的崛起，为教育带来了巨大的改变，请以“我看互联网教育”为主题，写一篇英语作文，字数在150字左右。
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内容要点，一个不漏
贵州黔西一中徐漂漂同学的作品，论点明晰，从正反两方面全面地探讨了互联网教育的优势与劣势。
My views on Internet education
贵州黔西一中 高三19班 徐漂漂
指导教师 彭伦文
Nowadays , with the rapid development of technology and economy, Internet education has become an increasingly important part in our daily life. Not only does it provide us with a convenient platform but also makes our study more colorful and interesting. Here are my views on it.
Above all, faced with the difficulties that Corona Virus Disease has brought to education, it is Internet education that makes it possible for all the students to study again, just like what the Ministry of education said:“suspended class, ongoing learning.”Moreover,what benefits us most is that it can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our knowledge. Helpful and useful, our excellent and professional teachers can have live classes for us students,by which we can be educated better and make great progress.Communicating with teachers directly is also an advantage of Internet education. At the same time, I have to say that there are also some drawbacks, for example, it may do harm to our eyes and decrease our activity in study. However,I am convinced that as long as we make every effort to cut down the harm that the Internet may do to us and make full use of it,we will turn the disadvantages into advantages.
All in all, so convenient and useful is Internet education that I hold the firm belief that it will possess a bright future and make our learning more interesting as well as efficient.
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结构明晰，文章连贯
文章整体结构流畅，思路清晰，是信件中的高分作文。
Dear John
贵州毕节四中 高三1班 陈思凌
指导教师：幸贵丹
Dear John,
How is everything going? Knowing that you are interested in my experience in the Double Teacher class. I am writing to share it with you.
First of all, the Double Teacher class means that two teachers can help us in our study. A teacher communicates with us through the Internet to realize online teaching for us. Another teacher can accompany us in school and we can have face to face classes. What's more, It is the Double Teacher class that enables us to contact the education of famous teachers and get better education. Last but not the least, I have been in contact with the English Double Teacher class for about two years, my English scores have improved a lot. Not only did I learn how to remember words better, but also I knew how to write compositions well and so on. I really appreciate the help of teachers. I will work hard in the future study.
If you want to know more about the Double Teacher class, please feel free to ask me. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua.
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词汇高级，语法复杂
文章词汇地道准确，比如用advent (the coming of an important event, person, invention, etc) 来修饰网络技术；用generate (to produce or create sth.) 来代替produce的使用等，都展示出小作者的词汇功底。
Internet Education
河北广宗县第一中学 336班 徐广宁
指导教师：魏延荣
Recently, with the advent and development of the Internet technology, there has been a growing concern among the public over the topic of the Internet Education.
It is undeniable that the Internet education will definitely generate a variety of positive effects. To begin with, the Internet education can foster a fairer environment for students from different backgrounds. Take our Double Teachers Class online as an example, we can have easy access to all the advanced educational resources from every corner of the globe, which overcomes the geographical barriers. Moreover, what must be mentioned is that the Internet education promotes individual abilities and interests in a free and open form of learning, taking different learning speeds of the students into consideration. Last but not least, it can be said with certainty that we would never go through the hard time during the epidemic in 2020 without the Internet education.
Considering all the advantages discussed above, it is advisable that we highly value the Internet education and apply to in our studies. We are, therefore, supposed to take a positive attitude and believe that it will have a promising prospect.
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书写工整，卷面美观
本次的一等奖作品，都达到了这个标准，在卷面整洁方面让人眼前一亮：
内容、结构、语法、书写，组成高考作文评分标准中的重要方面，把握住这四点，不断打磨精进，就能把握住高考英语作文分数。这些大招小编get到了，你呢？
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